Do I write well? Or No? Advice on my writing?

Listen, the honest truth is it doesn't matter how well you write now. All you need to do is keep reading and writing, then maybe when you're thirty five and actually have some life experience to draw from you can ask for the quality of writing. Here's the tip I found has actually improved my writing the most: hide it. Hide it somewhere you'll find it in six months or a year. Don't search it out. Don't think about where you might have put it. After all that time has passed, after having read another author, after having written other things, then you can read it as if it weren't your own, and hopefully you'll have a better understanding of what is wrong with that. (BTW a single kit in a litter isn't something to be proud of for a cat)