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I just woke up dreaming about weed again, that seems to be the only thing I care about these days. That and my girl friend but my girl doesn't care about me anymore. If she found me dead she'd leave my corps on the floor, prance around my body thinking is this a trick or for shore. She's an evil witch she plays tricks on my mind but tricks are for kids not bitchz In disguise. Your a beautiful girl but looks are deceiving. Im afraid if I rest you'll be leaving your a monster when im dreaming so im never sleepin. Now u know its true when I say im thinking about u 24/7. Im sorry my personality isn't the best but I feel like shyt when u treat me like the rest. Im not your friend im here to feel on your breast I feel your heart beat race you make mine bump like bass I love you from here to space but if you keep treating me like this im gonna have to leave you In that place.